The End Of Everything Comments

Apologies for the duff info in the last comment: the title of the Browne song is 'The Times You've Come'. Meant to come back before this, but was waiting for something new. I see you're working on Today, through every T. Good work Lin! jim

'But the need for love will still remain' sang Jackson Browne in 'Sing My Songs to Me'. A very fine sentiment to echo. Hard hitting brevity that doesn't squeeze the sadness out. Strong writing again Lin. jim x

An interesting piece about attachment and loss of control - succinct and articulate - Your last line is spot on - believe me! Love, Allie xxxx

...pithy, straight to the point anfd pow! Right in the orchestra pit

Love this poem Lin, the title gives it a sense of drama but you save it by lifting it with message of hope and love, very well written. HG: -) xx

True Love will always survive: -) Few words chosen effectively....well written Love...TO