Wednesday, April 6, 2016

The End of an Ethnic Dream Comments

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Cigarettes in my mouth
to puncture blisters in my brain.
My bass a fine piece of furniture.
My fingers soft, too soft to rattle
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Jay Wright
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Dr Antony Theodore 06 April 2016

Here, we shoot off every day to new horizons, coffee shops, bars, natural tonsorial parlors, plays, streets, pamphlets, days, sun, heat, love, anger, politics, days, and sun...... thank you very much dear poet for this poem.. you write like T: S Eliot. liked your poem very very much. thank you again. tony Just sent a comment on your poem and voted you a big 10. If you have time would you read my poem. “If you die before me” and comment and vote it. I did it for you now Thank you.

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 April 2016

Here, we shoot off every day to new horizons, coffee shops, bars, natural tonsorial parlors, plays, streets, pamphlets, days, sun, heat, love, anger, politics, days, and sun...... thank you very much dear poet for this poem.. you write like T: S Eliot. liked your poem very very much. thank you again. tony

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