The End....... * Iwant U* =[ Babey Pleeze Comments

Another great write but it reads as if you expect to fail and depresses me on behalf of the girl.

''goodbye is what i should say but i dont see no good part'' great way to catch the readers attention from the start. but top to bottom another great poem.

this poem is very true, it's a very wonderful heart wrenching poem, so much pain you put into this poem, it was utterly beautiful.~Hazel G.E