Friday, March 4, 2005

The End Comments

Rating: 2.7

Not a whisper is heard
nor a shadow be seen.
When she gave me the word
it was vicious and lean.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Christine Magee 04 March 2005

Beautifully told and a delight to read. Chrissie

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Gillian.E. Shaw 04 March 2005

I like this little tale! It has a nice pace...

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Allan James Saywell 04 March 2005

i saw the title 'The End' i thought the end of the world, but know just the end for the guy with the suitcase, just between you and i herbert, was it her suitcase, generaly that is the only thing you will get when leaving on bad terms A great little poem With a warmth allan

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Sandra Osborne 04 March 2005

Well, you need to get the girl sometimes. Maybe a Ciffon girl? ? ;) nice piece.

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