Monday, October 26, 2015

The End Comments

Rating: 5.0

you were gone
to bring cups of tea
to drink together and know
how does taste life
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Sina Sanjari
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Souren Mondal 05 November 2015

A really well-composed poem Sina.. I really loved how you elevated something as mundane as a cup of tea into something more 'poignant' and perhaps spiritually significant too... Writing something this short, simple, and yet deeply meaningful and profound is not everyone's cup of tea... ______________________ Thank you for sharing...

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Sina Sanjari 05 November 2015

Souren; Your comment makes me so glad.Thank you.

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Melvina Germain 01 November 2015

Vivid imagery and it brought forth a great deal of sadness for me as the anticipation, waiting, longing was very much apart of the soul...Excellent poem.....

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Sina Sanjari 05 November 2015

sadness...sadness which is end and at the same time endless.

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Rajnish Manga 26 October 2015

I have been touched by the somber tone of the narrative- somewhat tragic. A poignant poem. Could we have a poet's note on the fringe. Thanks.

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Sina Sanjari 28 October 2015

Thanks Ranjish Manga Yeah a poignant poem

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