you were gone
to bring cups of tea
to drink together and know
how does taste life
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Vivid imagery and it brought forth a great deal of sadness for me as the anticipation, waiting, longing was very much apart of the soul...Excellent poem.....
I have been touched by the somber tone of the narrative- somewhat tragic. A poignant poem. Could we have a poet's note on the fringe. Thanks.
A really well-composed poem Sina.. I really loved how you elevated something as mundane as a cup of tea into something more 'poignant' and perhaps spiritually significant too... Writing something this short, simple, and yet deeply meaningful and profound is not everyone's cup of tea... ______________________ Thank you for sharing...
Souren; Your comment makes me so glad.Thank you.