The End Comments

I don't think I fully understood that poem. And I dont think it's my right to. But the emotions, the pain, the utter depravity of the situation. That I could understand.

Humans were made for so much more, than what becomes of us, My father and my uncles served during Vietnam, One of them paid the ultimate price, and for what... The pen is mightier than the sword... dead men cant listen.. Let it out, nice work

A true storyteller. That was really engaging. Ladies and Gentlemen there's more to come. You definitely had me sucked into the story line. Great Job! 10+