Monday, December 29, 2008

The End Comments

Rating: 5.0

I don't know what I'm waiting for
Was there something that I missed
I don't know what I'm looking for
If it even exists
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Sonya Florentino
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Patti Masterman 07 October 2009

So poignant and fragile and defenseless; just waiting to see what comes next, is all we frail humans can do, hoping to be shown some mercy, but never counting on it: all that is in here, and so much more. Thanks for this; it's worth reading a hundred poems to find only one like this one.

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Shari . 29 December 2008

this flows very nicely. and i really enjoyed it.

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Sonya Florentino

Sonya Florentino

Manila, Philippines (residing NYC)
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