Wednesday, November 5, 2008

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Jordan Stephens
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*Trusting You* 11 November 2008

A shattered dream A broken lie great...amazing lines! infact I love this poem very well written. good job. I think I have been there and understand the pain and wanting to die. *Purkey Girl*

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I don't like the dying of the poem but I do understand the hurt being expressed.

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