Sunday, July 27, 2008

The End Comments

Rating: 4.9

Sadness and pain overflowed your mind.
People said you were sane,
But they couldnt see into your mind,
To find all those dark thoughts.
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Kat Edwards
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Jayson Kennedy 14 August 2009

nice ink kat like them all but i relate more too this 1 u seem to have tha same demons as me it hurts when i wake up but my ink is connected to my soul ur friend jayson

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Aubrey silver 08 February 2009

you are a great poet your poems are simple simplicity it was a treat it self to read them

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Randy Hogan 15 January 2009

sadness can over load our minds with pain..... soulful write 10

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Khaos Dven 08 January 2009

thats def my fave kat.10

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Drake Kinkaid 24 October 2008

Visible sadness and pain in this one, But good I'm sorry..

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Sarwar Chowdhury 28 August 2008

well written.........10

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Subham Dutta 09 August 2008

Hi Kat, It's inner meaning of the poem is very good.

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Bill Thomas 31 July 2008

A very powerful piece, Kat - glad you didn't join them, as there's a lot of poetry inside you yet... keep it up!

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xxxxx xxx 29 July 2008

wow a relastic situation, shows how deep emotionals could flow if a loved one was to lose their life or even take their own one

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Tom Balch 28 July 2008

WOW..see, told you, your good 10/10

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Frank Cannon 28 July 2008

A brutal reality given wing by a pen filled with the ink of deaths dark stain.

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MMM...BURN...ouchh! ! this is mucho strong..... i never knew you were this good of a writer, i didnt even know you wrote! ! all these months of knowing you, and seeing you, never knew... love youuu! ! ..mills..

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ohmigod.......katt....

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Daniel Allen 27 July 2008

I feel your pain through your words.

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