The End Comments

'The end of something is the beginning of another' like a everything in live. But with a hope. We are at the end of something and we can remember, that something would beginning Best regards Dorota

Thank you for sharing your thoughts, view and concept with the rest of us. You have an interesting look on The End of whatever comes or goes. It is a good pondering piece, that's for sure. Through this I see a summary of life and all that pertains to it including our surroundings, the environment, and that moment when all things come to a close. Here you tie everything up, while giving the impression that although it may seem the end, it can be the beginning of something else. Well done. Thanks for sharing and many blessings to you

Whole poem thoughtful but I especially like how the last line reminds us of how our minds habitually work, probably or could be, out of necessity. Something to think about. Our delight in in the future.

Very suggestive, touching and convincing, well donre

true every thing has ending, sun come and go and moon also come and go, its circyle. thanks for sharing

The end of something is the beginning of another, Should we remember how many times That the child has been a sophomore, a senior? At birth, we were reminded by countless chimes Of life, that there is an end to everything, And there is always a new beginning. The constant ending of matters sends the wrong message, Always remember that life is a passage. We move on from one state to another, It is mind-boggling that we’re always thinking about the future.... i am in love with this stanza... this poem is hands down amazing..

The cycle of time. Clocks, calenders, and other tools to mark our aging. Endless until the end. When it is over, everything stops...DC

Life is a passage from body to soul...from senses to extra-senses... from ephemera to eternity from the human to the devine...abd its greatness lies in this very absurdity...

Beautiful poem. Well penned.

wonderful poem nicely written +10

True poem, like if u auction for something and didnt get the part its doesnt mean end of it you can kept trying until you get part Fanastic write Another great one 10++++

The end is not necessarily final which is what you have expressed. Thanks for sharing.

true....life is wieerd and with time that goes on and on.a poem of very much reality in life.

Very nice poem. Hope you wright many more to come.

a good poetry.. hope to read a lot of your poems...

Interesting. Your poem does get the mind going! I will be reading more of your work too. Keeping poetry alive, Deborah.

Herbert this is truelly an amazing poem that has astounded me. I hope you keep up the work to the best of your ability because I'll be looking for new additions to your collection!

a great poem sir nice idea i really like it

Your closing lines were very effective, Herbert, in this most interesting and well expressed free style poem. Though we may bemoan our past, as well as our current times, we always look toward the future with hope. I guess it is one of mankind's traits, caried over from pre-historic times! Carl.

Time is what will never returns nice poem