Sunday, March 23, 2008

The End Comments

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The burning embers of love surround my heart,
still smouldering, but dying slowly.
Starved of oxygen, as i am starved of your love.
Gone are the flames of desire, that once lit up my soul within.
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christopher murphy
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Lalay Allan 24 February 2009

The dying embers of love surround my heart leaves a heavy feeling in my heart. Very well written. I like this very much.

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Tanya Stanford 30 August 2008

I don't think anyone has said it better. Very good composition.

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