Monday, August 1, 2016

The Enchantress Comments

Rating: 4.5

I thought they said the beautiful ones are not yet born?
But here is one I've met and she makes heads turn.
Melting mortal mountains like wax with just a smile,
Her acquistion of this exquisite charm is vague.
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Emmanuel Chikody
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Chinedu Dike 02 August 2016

Beautiful piece of poetry elegantly brought forth in lovely poetic diction from the heart with conviction. 'A Thing Of Beauty Is A Joy For Ever' - John Keats. Thanks for sharing Emmanuel. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Emmanuel Chikody 03 August 2016

Thanks a lot Chinedu..I'll check out your poem.And thank you once again for deeming it thoughtful to share your work for my perusal, such act helps us learn more

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Chukwuebuka Adebayo 02 August 2016

i love the way you celebrate this maid.its fabulous.wellcooked.but did you mean you love her to be your wife at future time?

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Emmanuel Chikody 03 August 2016

Once again thanks for your appreciative comment (wellcooked) ..As for your question, what makes you think the poem was written for girl/woman? It 'might' be my love for a metaphysical being and as a poet known for putting hidden messages in a poem, i used a feminine description

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Emmanuel Chikody 02 August 2016

Thanks a lot

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Kelly Kurt 01 August 2016

Nicely penned, Emmanuel. Thank you

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