Tuesday, January 14, 2014

The Empty-Minded Poet Comments

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I Took A Pen I was Satisfied To Write,
I Tried Too Write BUT,
But I Didnt Know What Was On My Mind,
I Thought To Deep And Deep But Still Nothing Pops Up.
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MxOLisi DhlaDhla
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Neela Nath Das 17 January 2014

Huh! Really a good write, a nice topic.What to write also is my problem.But, you are successful enough on this theme.

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Mike Barrett 15 January 2014

The truth of the last verse (line) of this poem can't be challenged.... keep on writing, that's the best way to strengthen your skills. Cheers!

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Gajanan Mishra 14 January 2014

I like it, thanks.

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