The Emptiness Comments

So true, dear Aarzoo, but this is a very sad poem. Excellent short poem about your heart's emptiness.5 Stars full score!

True Aarzooji, nice write.

I agree with Robert, a barren heart is always empty. Your poem demonstrates such sadness and that love will flow again.

I concur with the brilliant remark of great poet Susan Williams. its very difficult for the person of such character to get there. A powerful poem....top score!

I hope so much that this is only a brief and transient description of your heart, my friend--I think everyone should feel the sad depths because how else can we feel the joy of the heights---but getting there is sure the pits--a five star write