Sunday, February 25, 2007

The Emotional Balance Comments

Rating: ★5.0

I am lost in my own room
Like a tourist in a tomb
Everything looks so strange
Reach out nothing in range
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Tranquil Ocean 25 February 2007

Great breezy read.Enjoyed reading. TO

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Lynda Robson 25 February 2007

This is lovely Dave, well-written and with the special DD touch, Love Lynda xx

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Patricia Gale 25 February 2007

Delightful piece Dave, the last stanza grand!

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Michael Shepherd 25 February 2007

Nice poem, David, and brilliant last line. I'm always amused when two neighbouring poems posted have some common thread, however slight. We've both weighed up the balance!

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