Monday, November 20, 2006

The Emo Proposal Comments

Rating: 4.0

My shallow and hating heart burns again
You want me to act with you as if we were friends
I only know of one unconditional love
I hold everything to force myself not to shove
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Terry Moore
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Kailynd McGregor 20 November 2006

i really enjoyes this poem, i understand everything you said! great job, at expressing your feelings! ~Kailynd

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