The Embrace Comments
You weren't well or really ill yet either;
just a little tired, your handsomeness
tinged by grief or anticipation, which brought
to your face a thoughtful, deepening grace.
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A meaningful and thought provoking soliloquy. with steadily flowing emotions. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
Excellent excellent writing. It is like we are overhearing his thoughts- not like he is busily constructing poetry for an outsider to read- -very natural flow and bears such confusion, such pain, such love, such a search for truth
Nice thought provoking poem...Why so difficult, remembering the actual look of you? Without a photograph, without strain?
To embrace the muse of love and to respect nature. Thanks for sharing.
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7/27/2025 9:31:47 PM # 1.0.0
Well expressed thoughts and feelings. An insightful work of art. Thanks for sharing, Mark. Remain enriched.