I was just flicking ash
on burnt out phrases
scraping jaded thoughts
in hardened wax
...
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This poem flows with a sense of realness. There seems to be a tone of searching... am I right? Excellent poem. All the best, Seán
Lovely poem, the words string together with the handeling of an extremely competant poet. Top class! Nick
These words are just class, they have so much depth and meaning. cheers Sylvie