Saturday, January 28, 2006

The Embers Comments

Rating: 3.5

I was just flicking ash
on burnt out phrases
scraping jaded thoughts
in hardened wax
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Sheila Knowles
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Sylvia Spencer 13 March 2006

These words are just class, they have so much depth and meaning. cheers Sylvie

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Seán O' Muiriosa 28 January 2006

This poem flows with a sense of realness. There seems to be a tone of searching... am I right? Excellent poem. All the best, Seán

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Michael Gale 28 January 2006

I was impressed with this poem, you've made my day!

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Nick Hilton 28 January 2006

Lovely poem, the words string together with the handeling of an extremely competant poet. Top class! Nick

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