She appears out of nowhere, and in a jiffy she is gone
Keeping me guessing, about what went so wrong
She is an elusive lady to me
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Ya there are a few females who enjoy doing exactly this to their guys. I should say it is a complete poem in all respects. You have said some words about the situation, and also the reason why she does it. (My desperation it seems, gives her a kick) . and also what would finally happen. If i were you, i would have allowed her to tease me more an get those kicks out of it. To get more such enjoyment she would come back to me again and again to tease me more. A nice lovely romantic poem. i will vote 10 for you
if u r sincere, woo her with respect, i don't see any reason for her to ignore u ravi. one thing is clear- u r clear hearted, u write what u feel...good one.
‘I hope she realizes and tries to understand /If this goes on long, she would lose a good friend She won't remain an elusive lady to me.’ Indeed she is elusive …and lastly poet recovers from delusiveness …and its poetic mastery … 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK