Tuesday, November 17, 2009

The Elixir Of Night Comments

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Drink in great draughts of this intoxicating elixir
The maiden trembles as the snake licks her
Pleasure rolls over the senses and true knowledge is born
Senseless doctrines are what we scorn.
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Rebecca Roeder
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Chrispin Kamara-Johnson 17 November 2009

Great poem for some reason i get the Eve and Satan in the first 3 lines. well done.

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