Sunday, September 9, 2018

The Elephant's Odd Love Affair Comments

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It happened in the month of May
that the elephant fell in love
with a mosquito. And luckily enough
for him, the buzzing tiny insect
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John Beaton 15 September 2018

Nice satire, Paul, on the way people over-blow the importance of status and culture. By making these concerns over-shadow obvious biological incompatibility, your poem makes the point amusingly. and effectively.

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Paul Hartal 16 September 2018

A concise and erudite analysis. I appreciate it, John!

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