Saturday, September 5, 2009

/\the Elements\/ Comments

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Calm and silent is the air,
barely a whisper.
The sky, a heavenly shade of pink,
and soft blue.
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Angelic Warrior
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Obinna Eruchie 08 October 2009

How wonderfully you put it, 'Wind, Water, Fire and Earth, / the basis of life, / the controle of our being, / our power and strength, / our kindness and love. / The Elements of Life...', it is beautiful.

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Rachel Butler 07 September 2009

Solid and strong is the Earth under our feet giving us a path to walk along. Rachel Ann Butler

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 September 2009

Calm and silent is the air, barely a whisper. The sky, a heavenly shade of pink, and soft blue. The sun is setting on a most beautiful evening, come back tomorrow my dear friend. beautiful gifts from the God to have created such heavenly bodies and joy in it we get... so much impressed by the write....10 read mine sun.... cool breeze

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amazing poem.. wonderful.. me love this.

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Stacey Watts 05 September 2009

Greatly written piece. So many aspects we seem to take for granted so nicely laid out here. Very well written.

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