Monday, June 13, 2011

The Effect Of A Love Unreturned Comments

Rating: 5.0

Pain ... Anger ... Guilt
All in a body that's been broken down.
All in the mind of a girl who a loved a boy without end.
That boy who built her up with words...
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Karen Monroy
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 13 June 2011

Nice poem. Great sentiments. The poem is rich in imagery and style. Great write indeed. I give it 10/10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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