Thursday, December 29, 2011

The Edge Of The End Comments

Rating: 5.0

Looking out at the world from this ledge
thinking have I gone insane
my feet getting closer and closer to the edge
is my sanity something I’ll ever regain
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Melissa June
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Adeline Foster 14 September 2012

Thankfully you didn't land, or you would not have been able to write this poem. It is so fortunate that youths like yourself can express for others what it is like to be in that insecure, never-never period of adolescence. A good write. Read mine - Bloom of Youth - Adeline

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Samantha Turner 08 May 2012

I love this poem a lot, Great work

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