The Edge Of The Cliff Comments

Brilliant. Sometimes we awake from a bad dream to this reality, depicted, with anxiety, so well sp.

Wow! You said it all and I've been at the edge of the same cliff most of my life. Words are such powerful forces of release and finding some peace. Thank you for sharing, I found some peace in knowing there are many of us that feel this way that we're not alone and we all search for the same thing with out taking that final step. You're a very good poet with the gift of truly expressing your emotions with words.. inspiring and a good write.

The darkness can get us all at some point, Sometimes more than once. But as long as we Can fight back to the light each time, then the Darkness can keep coming, because it will never Win, ever. Good poem, a good write. Really liked it.

The heart may be weak, and sometimes it may even give in, but deep down there's a light that never goes out. -Kingdom Hearts Good poem, Sometimes, I choose to fade in the dark, but I always come back to the light. That's the way life is, You can't be happy all the time, or what would happiness be? My mom believes when god comes, your gonna live forever and be happy all the time, but it wouldn't be nothing without sadness, hate, or challenges. That's why we live. Good poem, keep them going.

then light forms a lasso and catches you - light will do that. the emotions are all there and that makes the poem good.

We are all just one step away from tumbling into the abyss... Yet we find a reason not to take that final step... Wonderful poem...