Monday, June 11, 2012

The Edge Is Near Comments

Rating: 5.0

Locked inside my dungeon I call home listening to the sounds of my mind making me uncomfortable, The sounds that push me closer to the edge, it is so near and my hands scratch the walls and my head drags below my shoulders, my fist clench and pound holes inside my soul.

The edge is near and I am being pushed closer, if I fall how long will I fall for? Will it be forever or will it be fast and end quickly? My patiences are depleting and fingers are bleeding and the dirt sticks under my nails, locked inside and secluded my heart is hollow and the ideas of the brain are insanity, insanity that keeps me in the dungeon I call home, where is the sanity?
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COMMENTS
Jessie Jett 16 June 2012

Indeed deep Connor. I much liked the imagery, and the longing for your words. Feels of helplessness, and submission. Don't give up!

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 16 June 2012

People in such a situation should Hold the cliff and climb up. even if they are pushed down. Don't ever give up. We are born to live happily.

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Alex Medina 12 June 2012

Wow. This was very deep. Might I invite you to read Never Surrender?

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