Monday, July 16, 2018

The Ecstasy Beyond The Horizon Comments

Rating: 5.0

An empty horizon,
vastness of the infinite sky.
Clouds float above the desolate seascape.
A sudden swirling breeze softly
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Sanzeda S K
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Sanzeda Sultana 07 August 2018

Thanks a lot Mr. Dev for liking it . Tried my level best to make it more vivid and imagenative :

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Dev Anand 07 August 2018

Colour blends a little by little and stirs the stillness of the serene silent waves where the sky touches the sea. A divine last cosmic ray gleams.. from the beauty of the Horizon you go to the divine. very fine poem dear poetess.. dev

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Sanzeda S K 07 August 2018

Thank you so much Dr. Tony for your lovely remarks. Much obliged :

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 August 2018

sudden swirling breeze softly whispers and embraces the solitude. One's eyes are opened and bemused by the reflection of a mystic crimson shade onto the clement water......You h ave a poetic soul dear poetes.. wonderful description and very very poetic.. thank u. tony

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Sanzeda S K 27 July 2018

@ Mr Jazib Thanks for your remark. Will give feedback on your poem :)

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Jazib Kamalvi 27 July 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Sanzeda. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Sanzeda Sultana 19 July 2018

Thanks Samita Di :)

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Samita Chakraborty 19 July 2018

Superb

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Sanzeda S K 18 July 2018

Corrected. It will take time....it seems. Thanks and best regards :

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Sanzeda Sultana 18 July 2018

Thank you so much sir. Will correct it. We have edit options here. Best Regards

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Mushtaque Ahmed 18 July 2018

Devine or divine

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Dr. Reefat Rubbi 18 July 2018

Excellent

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Nevia 18 July 2018

Excellent👍

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Robert Murray Smith 16 July 2018

Excellent- - - +10 Welcome.

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