An empty horizon,
vastness of the infinite sky.
Clouds float above the desolate seascape.
A sudden swirling breeze softly
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Colour blends a little by little and stirs the stillness of the serene silent waves where the sky touches the sea. A divine last cosmic ray gleams.. from the beauty of the Horizon you go to the divine. very fine poem dear poetess.. dev
Thank you so much Dr. Tony for your lovely remarks. Much obliged :
sudden swirling breeze softly whispers and embraces the solitude. One's eyes are opened and bemused by the reflection of a mystic crimson shade onto the clement water......You h ave a poetic soul dear poetes.. wonderful description and very very poetic.. thank u. tony
@ Mr Jazib Thanks for your remark. Will give feedback on your poem :)
A good start with a nice poem, Sanzeda. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.
Corrected. It will take time....it seems. Thanks and best regards :
Thank you so much sir. Will correct it. We have edit options here. Best Regards
Thanks a lot Mr. Dev for liking it . Tried my level best to make it more vivid and imagenative :