Friday, May 11, 2012

The Eclipse Comments

Rating: 4.5

This world has been without its moon for far too long
Steadfastly clinging to the silent sky.
Must light be absent from mankind's arid heart?
Darkness hides its soul and spares not the one that glows
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Godfrey Morris
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Brian Skyers 09 December 2012

so very nice. I too despair as to when we will see.

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Jessie Hopkins 18 May 2012

A-maz-ing. You, my fellow writer, are a very talented guy. Please, keep writing. :)

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Tsunami Hs 18 May 2012

I love your word choice. Very pretty poem.

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Valerie Dohren 16 May 2012

Short but beautifully penned.

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Godfrey Morris

Godfrey Morris

Kingston, Jamaica
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