Saturday, October 22, 2022

The Echoes Of The Rain Stones Comments

Rating: 5.0

The autumn birds have disappeared
at the touch of rain, bullets geared
but we are at least very wise
we are constantly in disguise
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Rebecca Navarre 05 November 2022

Beyond #ing! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 05 November 2022

shelter the hearts that are hurting and suffering so! .. Ever so heart moving and powerfully expressed! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 05 November 2022

The power of heart in Prayer! .. An ever so meaningful poem as we all look to God to end the cruelty and

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Congratulations dear Sylvia! ! ! Today this poem is ranked #38 in the list of 100 Best Poems of Members, featured on PoemHunter. Truly, you deserve the recognition, Dear Poet

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Hi Sylvia, this beautiful poem is ranked #46 among the 100 "BEST POEMS OF MEMBERS" featured on PoemHunter today. Congratulations.

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s.zaynab kamoonpury 24 October 2022

I couldn't gather which incident this is about yet it is a wonderful poem, , indeed prayer is the powerful gentle weapon and shield. Kudos!

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 24 October 2022

Pray, pray and pray to find out the true thyself; praying is the action of inside peacefulness; nice to read the poem

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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 October 2022

To dear Nosheen, I am very happy that you like the poem, thank you, dear.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 23 October 2022

A powerful poem with an appeal and prayer........Top score + To my favourite

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 23 October 2022

You are absolutely right dearest Sylvia. All we can do is pray hard that human beings have more compassion and love in their hearts.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 23 October 2022

Pelting stones at birds is horrible. I just cannot imagine why people stoop down so low.

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Nosheen Irfan 23 October 2022

Comfort of prayer in the wake of horror, so beautifully illustrated. It's a very profound and meaningful poem I must say Sylvia.

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If we look back we would find many a mad men who held the entire world to ransom. But, like Hitler, their place is in the waste bin of history.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 October 2022

You are so right, dear Unnikrishnan, absolutely in the waste bin of history, but this history is at the moment still a story of every day, Ido hope this will be soon history. In gratitude, Sylvia

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Nabakishore Dash 23 October 2022

Mam, your last stanza indicates the most pertinent method, is prayer. Great thinking revered Mam.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 October 2022

Thank you so much, Dr. Dash, your response I always appreciated very well.

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