Tuesday, January 3, 2017

The Echoes A Love Sonnet Comments

Rating: 5.0

How do I stop the echo of you
in everything I sense? Should I block
the songs of birds because their trills
remind me of your voice speaking sweetly?
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Daniel Brick
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M Asim Nehal 29 October 2018

It is really difficult to control emotions when the love echoes back to you the old songs. Nicely written,10+++

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Simone Inez Harriman 09 March 2017

How heaven and earth become so alive with all the senses flooding the emotions, and how excruciatingly the conflicts of love can be when Cupid wickedly wounds with his arrows of desire.

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Daniel Brick 10 March 2017

Yes, it's so true about Cupid. Despite the setbacks ans failures who could give up the ALIVENESS of the Love Experience. Even a one-sided love which is not filfilled evokes that amazing aliveness of senses, heart, mind! !

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 January 2017

With the muse of love and life! So much like your being. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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