Saturday, April 15, 2006

The Easterbunny And Angie's Boy (Tit-For-Tat-Poem) Comments

Rating: 3.5

The Easterbunny came and laid
a dozen eggs, there, in the shade.
As Angie's son rolled out of bed
and to the Bunny he then said:
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Herbert Nehrlich
COMMENTS
Chris Mendros 16 February 2007

i, too, see it as quite humorous, with a harsh dash of reality at the end. Like poems that rhyme, every tradition is fair game. Guess being childish trumps being child-like today. 'Tit-for-Tat', indeed. Guess every good thing has the potential to turn bad. CJGM

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kskdnj sajn 15 April 2006

Very funny Herbert...my son would never.. athough he probably would think this was funny so I'll read it to him! ! Stay tuned for your Easter visit. :)

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Scarlett Treat 15 April 2006

I myself thought this was very funny for some reason! The king is dead! Long live the king....

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Gina Onyemaechi 15 April 2006

Was expecting something rather more lively and cheery, Herbsy. But then, it is up to you alone to decide what tone to give a poem. And it is still a well-told and well-rhymed story. Happy Easter. Love, Gina.

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Francesca Johnson 15 April 2006

Awww. Thought it was funny at first, and very entertaining. But got sadder and sadder. Maybe I'm just a old child. Fran xx

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