Saturday, August 11, 2012

The Earthquake Comments

Rating: 5.0

Shake! Shake! and let all wake
From sleep and rescue for God's sake
The ground moves suddenly
Everything drops uncommonly
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Sina Farajzadeh
COMMENTS
Valerie Dohren 03 August 2014

Earthquakes can be both real and metaphorical. Your poem can be interpreted either way. Good one Sina.

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Mehri Mehraban 22 November 2013

The climax of poem is the last verse, and spreads out its message. And still we try to stand and not to leave our sane I experienced earthquake and many other things like earthquake. Earthquake in my life, opinions Life style... And in every time I try not to leave my sane.how nicely you composed this struggle.

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Nader Baheri 17 August 2012

very beautiful written.show the fear you have felt.thank you so much for this beautiful poem.

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Hamid Negah 16 August 2012

It is a terrible accident...i am very sad about my compatriot ... thanks God that you and your family are alive. very beautiful poem, Sina

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 13 August 2012

Wow, thanks God you are alive, we really were scared because of this event. God help all the happy and nice and kind people of west and north to defeat all the sadness and God bless the souls those have been gone. your poetry even in this condition is so nice.! really nice take care dear Mate.

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