Thursday, May 24, 2012

The Earth Weeps Comments

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The blood seeps the pavement, a deep red
why must the blood of the innocent be shed?

the lifeless bodies, the unseeing eyes
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Maureen Adair
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Kristina Shabunin 07 June 2012

so? it doesnt make it right and it doesnt mean we should sit around doin nothin while this carnage and self destruction of the world is taking place. I am going to make a difference one way or another. and others can join me or stand against me either or.

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 07 June 2012

The blood and war is every where in the recent world as you know. keeling ordinary [people is going to be to be an art. but some how its a little depressing. isnt it?

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Kristina Shabunin 29 May 2012

thank you! (: I appreciate your feed back!

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Saadat Tahir 25 May 2012

a potent and consummate cry for change i can only hear the distant echoes ricocheting from rocky out crops...listening? ? ? ...some body..anybody......................... very nice we need to do our bit cheers :)

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