Oh, Earth
You are shedding
tears in silence
As you see
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The Earth is a poem close to my sentiments for the Mother Earth. The bountiful nature has bestowed so much for us, but what have we done in return? Only destroy, all the time. Yes Bharati, You are right! Man is so foolish! . Very well written poem with a significant message.10+++
Thank you Madam Dr. Radhakrishna Menon for your kind comment.Protection of earth's environment is a responsibility of every citizen as well as every nation.If nations are engaged in stockpiling nuclear and hydrogen bombs, chemical weapons, and when there are war cry on religious, ethnic or racial issue, when material comfort and technological advance are the parameters of development, what future is there for earth?
This well demonstrates the present plight of Mother Earth. It touches on all the atrocities man is callously inflicting on her! Sadly he doesn't realize that he is cutting the branch on which he sits. Beautiful poem carrying a great message, Bharati!
Poem with great environmental message that makes the readers sit up. (10)
How wonderful a poem this is, the earths skin burning the green off, reckless mans actions ruining our home! A very good write! !
The foolish man When will he realize That his reckless actions Ring the death knell For this beautiful planet Earth, our Mother Dear... realization may solve the problem. Nicely composed. Thanks for sharing.
What a great poignant write, as it was once said that it will be man who distroys earth. Great write Bharati. Annette
An amazing write that beautifully highlights the troubles afflicting our planet. Pollution is a problem that needs to be addressed and this poem emphatically calls for a solution. A huge 10.
Isn't, it amazing that our fellow humans can treat the planet so badly and not tremble in fear at what they are doing? You and I tremeble in fear but they just count their profits. Your poem is a warning that must be heeded but do suchpeople read poems with any sympathy? Keep writing your poems of appeal, theere must be voices that speak for the earth.
This love for our earth is really superb, any man with consciousness should be wakened by your sincere admonishment.
well, yes, this one surely fits the topic of our book, dear Bharati.. good!
Thank you Fabrizio Frosini for selecting this poem for your poetry project- Our Planet.The danger to our Planet is real.All nations should cooperate to save the Earth..
man can save himself! his feelings, dreams, relations, his home! his inner! most probably no. so dear earth, suffer. poem is nice
A beautiful touching poem....................................................
A marvelous write, so relevant and timely, considering the present state people have done to nature and environment. A poetry of deep emotional attachment. Well done. Rated 10+
A wonderful ode to earth! Thanks for sharing....top marks