Friday, November 6, 2015

The Earth Comments

Rating: 5.0

The earth in fever
The earth infected
The earth in blood,
The air stinks
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Afrooz Jafarinoor
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Kelly Kurt 06 November 2015

to the best of my knowledge, there hasn't been any period in recorded history (perhaps even well beyond) when there wasn't a war or many taking place on Earth. Only now, our wars could end humanity. Wonderful poem. Thanks, Afrooz.

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Rahman Henry 06 November 2015

Adam is looking for nothingness...... excellent poem

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 November 2015

Wonderfully described the pollution as Earth is in fever. Wonderful poem on war topic shared as war suffers many in Earth. A thought provoking poem shared.10

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