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In March they knock at the door of Chun Ni
The Girl of Spring eagerly lets them get in
One hundred flowers contend for beauty
Wait, wait, which one stands for her heart?
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This poem is striking in its movement from things observed by the speaker to the speaker being observed by them. On the literal level the girl brings spring flowers inside her house. But they become animate and demand attention, no longer passive Something without guile - sweetflowers - become almost, but not quite, sinister. I hope these flowers regain their innocence.
I like your last line, I hope these flowers regain their innocence. Hope innocence back to our heart in this chaoic world. Thank you.
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8/1/2025 10:24:50 PM # 1.0.0
Cigeng, I enjoyed reading your poems. But this one stands out. Exquisite imagery. Really sweet as the subtle voice of flowering! Keep writing. This is my first experience with Chinese poetry! I would cherish it. Well done. Do keep writing. Thanks for sharing.
Dear Unnikrishnan, I am so glad you liked the scent of Chinese in my small poem. Thank you!
Dear Unnikrishna, I am very glad you liked the scent of Chinese in my small poem. Thank you!