Tuesday, June 26, 2012

The Dying Flower Comments

Rating: 5.0

There was love in the room.
It was the laughter in the rain.

With nearly broken legs, it kept its pride.
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What a poem. Brevity is its beauty

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Dr Tapan Kumar Pradhan 18 October 2013

Dear Herant, I loved your poem. Short, sweet and skillfully crafted. From the first line itself the poem holds your attention. You have a real talent here, which you can hone still further to become a consummate poet. Wish you all the best for the contest. But you cannot predict anything in an Online Contest like this - which can be easily manipulated by cyber savvy poets! ! (See my poem Poem Hunter Contest Final just to have an idea of how a contest can be manipulated...)

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Ramesh Rai 24 September 2013

What a dying flower can express, nicely crafted here.

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James Bredin 26 June 2012

IF TIME IS NOT YOUR FRIEND THEN DYING WITH DIGNITY MIGHT HELP. HEAVY-DUTY THOUGHTS, I KNOW. BUT THAT'S LIFE AND DEATH.

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Ralph The Elf 26 June 2012

wow this is beautiful, nice concept and length, not too much but carries all the emotions it has to keep it up

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Autumn Winds 26 June 2012

When I read this poem it reminds me how time will continue even if you don't want it to; how I wish I could escape from the dying flower. It reminds me of how I wish I could change my past and how I can't change the past. I can only live with the decision I've made and the consequences for my actions. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem with me I look forward to reading more of your work -Autumn

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