Wednesday, January 26, 2011

The Dwelling Beast Within Comments

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I could sense it rise almighty high
I could not ignore the beast which dwells inside
I watched as the drama unfurled
As it charged out from my sight
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Alice Anne Gordon 29 January 2011

You describe a picture of anger and strong emotion well, I think it is easy to relate to this poem. Thank you, I am not alone. Best wishes, AA Gordon

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Kunal Seth 27 January 2011

Intense, we all have the rage inside but its difficult to explain it always which u did thats beautifull...

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