Sunday, July 12, 2020

The Duty Comments

Rating: 5.0

Flowers bloom and stay in gleam
And then fall down in utter gloom
Grieves none but Life and Beauty
Being destined ever transient
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Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair
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Anjandev Roy 17 July 2020

This is a superb piece......thank u, dear poet......anjandev roy.

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Anil Kumar Panda 17 July 2020

Such a beautiful poem on life and death. We must spread our fragrance of good manners and kindness like flowers do their beauty and essence. Flowers live for a short time but give the honey to the bees and birds and beauty to the onlookers. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 July 2020

A magnificent poem with a great message sir. Loved reading it.......10/10

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Thank you dear Dr. Dillip for the comments

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Aarzoo Mehek 13 July 2020

The circle of life never ceases to amaze us. Loved the way you expressed it.10++

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Thank you dear poetess. Every life on eart is assigned with some sort of duty or other. Its the flowers that have to give us beauty, fragrance and honey. The duty is being carried out without stop by a cycle of life.

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Mahtab Bangalee 12 July 2020

On the sobbing Mother Earth's bosom The dead fallen flowers lay scattered With petals quivering in the breeze's sigh And wet with the night's tears fallen on...excellently crafted And the note is meaningful to the poem

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Thank you dear poet Mahtab. Your appreciation of the poem delights me

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Cowboy Ron Williams 12 July 2020

Captivating poem!

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Thank you dear poet for nthe pleasing comments

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Bharati Nayak 12 July 2020

Wow- What a beautiful poem.The cycle of life and death has been expressed so marvelously.Let me quote- On the sobbing Mother Earth's bosom The dead fallen flowers lay scattered - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - On the sobbing Mother Earth's bosom The dead fallen flowers lay scattered

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Thank you very much dear Bharaati Nayak for the comments. Flowers bloom and fall. Caring not the fate new ones bloom so as to provide everything, the beauty, the fragrance, the honey to the needy and to make them happy being the duty assigned to them

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