Monday, May 7, 2012

The Dusk Of Horses Comments

Rating: 3.8

Right under their noses, the green
Of the field is paling away
Because of something fallen from the sky.

They see this, and put down
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James Dickey
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Rajan T Renganathan 30 March 2023

Nice poem to read.

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M Asim Nehal 01 January 2017

Nice poem with fantastic imageries. Thanks for sharing.

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A. Madhavan 26 June 2016

I would like readers to see my poem, written many years ago, and posted on PH: Pounding Hooves. The image came to me in a dream, with the sound of he hooves clattering on the road outside, in a small town. I wanted to convey it as a metaphor. Ananta Madhavan

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 June 2016

One by one! Nice work.

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Brian Jani 10 May 2014

Very well written, I like it

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