Tuesday, November 20, 2018

The Dull Stars Comments

Rating: 5.0

Spent the entire life
Counting the stars,
Everyone is so alike
From the near
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Bhavika Jain
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Anushka 28 November 2018

This is one of the best poems I have read in my life Totally love it

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 November 2018

We don't trust someone who is although less shiny but experienced enough to guide us. It's always about the right choice..in your poet's notes you have explained it so well. what you write is very true. look at the heart and the experience of goodness in them.. stars, shining, not so shining.. as example. very fine poem, well thought out. tony

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Bhavika Jain 22 November 2018

Thank u. Look at the heart and the experience of goodness in them is something we should start learning. Your comments encourage me to write more.

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