Monday, September 29, 2008

The Duel Comments

Rating: 5.0

Many heartbeats, many paces separate the duellers' eyes,
This circle drawn, retreat forsaken, spit of rain, impatient skies.
Face to face each tests intention, as the other burns sight back,
And there they root in statued silence, oblivious to the deepening black.
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Neil Graham Marsden
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David Threadgold 29 September 2008

Hi Neil. great imagery. clear enough to put yourself there with the duelers. I've used this subject a number of times but never with such depth of feeling. thanks for the read. **10** Regards Dave T.

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