Monday, November 9, 2015

The Duck Comments

Rating: 4.5

How cute the duck walks,
Beautiful when they flocks.
Walking along the raft,
Looks like going for a feast,
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VAIDYANATHAN.T. RAM
COMMENTS
Valsa George 12 November 2015

A very realistic poem on the life and habits of ducks! Except for a few spelling mistakes, the poem is a great piece of writing! Keep writing Vaidyanathan!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 12 November 2015

A poem on duck! That is really cute. It is so important to watch the birds and animals. We learn a lot from them. An interesting observation.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 10 November 2015

Verily, a good observation on ducks and an informative piece of work Loved reading it

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Ratnakar Mandlik 09 November 2015

Your observation is very nice and the write about ducks is very informative and interesting. The question raised in the end, when ducks can live in the world, then why can't human is thought provoking. Thanks for sharing.9 points.

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