The Dual Kingdom Comments

Poetry can be written in whatever form you wish to write it, let me tell you your poetry is very good, you can delet the message left by Jefferson Carter, I enjoyed reading it, well penned Lynda xx

Carry on! Your writing is good and you've said you're influenced by Donne. I would prefer stanzas too but maybe you have a reason to write in this style which my generation doesn't understand. Stand by the beauty of your words.

A wonderful celestial dance above our heads, isn't there? I found this poem well crafted in form, diction and function, Sir Alex! Balance proves to be a required element for true love in harmonious order with the devine. This work serves as a warm reminder of such noble notions. Thanks for contributing your sage writing! Warm regards, John.

Lovely poem, you romantic thing you.Exactly my cup of tea.Thanks.Kev

it is a delight to read a poem like this, very well done.

Beautiful words and imagery, enjoyed the concept, thank you for sharing, Alexander

sweet this is good.......

its a marvellous write with a very strong use of metaphors and imagineries...i luved it thnx for sharing 10++++ for this beautiful write rgds asif

very well written jolly good i loved it

this was a very good poem.. -bleeding keep writing! !

I was reading your poem. And i was brought into this nicely written piece of work. (10/10) Good job. i loved it. Keep going :)

I felt like I was transported in time...truth be known: I love period English movies! ! This one is better than a movie. A '10'. Very lyrical. Wish, I could write like this. All these young geniuses coming out of the woodwork. oh, la la!

I love it! Bravo! You write as if you were an old poet and not that of a young man. Keep on writing, it seems to be what you were designed to do? Ten! Linda across the sea. Say hi to Nessy or me! Had to say that, sorry! LOL

Has that eerie moors and spells of enchantment to it