Monday, November 24, 2008

The Dual Kingdom Comments

Rating: 5.0

The double sky we live below,
Is ruled in equal parts;
Two thrones, two kings, each sky aglow,
But which one rules our hearts?
...
Read full text

Alexander Steen Stewart
COMMENTS
Lynda Robson 27 November 2008

Poetry can be written in whatever form you wish to write it, let me tell you your poetry is very good, you can delet the message left by Jefferson Carter, I enjoyed reading it, well penned Lynda xx

0 0 Reply
Rani Turton 26 November 2008

Carry on! Your writing is good and you've said you're influenced by Donne. I would prefer stanzas too but maybe you have a reason to write in this style which my generation doesn't understand. Stand by the beauty of your words.

0 0 Reply
John Weber 26 November 2008

A wonderful celestial dance above our heads, isn't there? I found this poem well crafted in form, diction and function, Sir Alex! Balance proves to be a required element for true love in harmonious order with the devine. This work serves as a warm reminder of such noble notions. Thanks for contributing your sage writing! Warm regards, John.

0 0 Reply
Kevin Eaglesfield 25 November 2008

Lovely poem, you romantic thing you.Exactly my cup of tea.Thanks.Kev

0 0 Reply
Hugo Sanchez 25 November 2008

it is a delight to read a poem like this, very well done.

0 0 Reply
Howard Johnson 25 November 2008

Beautiful words and imagery, enjoyed the concept, thank you for sharing, Alexander

0 0 Reply
Annie Girl 25 November 2008

sweet this is good.......

0 0 Reply
Aijaz Asif 25 November 2008

its a marvellous write with a very strong use of metaphors and imagineries...i luved it thnx for sharing 10++++ for this beautiful write rgds asif

0 0 Reply
Ian Singer 25 November 2008

very well written jolly good i loved it

0 0 Reply
Carissa Mcbride 25 November 2008

this was a very good poem.. -bleeding keep writing! !

0 0 Reply
Angel Valdez 25 November 2008

I was reading your poem. And i was brought into this nicely written piece of work. (10/10) Good job. i loved it. Keep going :)

0 0 Reply
June Feir-Cruz 25 November 2008

I felt like I was transported in time...truth be known: I love period English movies! ! This one is better than a movie. A '10'. Very lyrical. Wish, I could write like this. All these young geniuses coming out of the woodwork. oh, la la!

0 0 Reply
Linda Winchell 24 November 2008

I love it! Bravo! You write as if you were an old poet and not that of a young man. Keep on writing, it seems to be what you were designed to do? Ten! Linda across the sea. Say hi to Nessy or me! Had to say that, sorry! LOL

0 0 Reply
Joseph Poewhit 24 November 2008

Has that eerie moors and spells of enchantment to it

0 0 Reply
Alexander Steen Stewart

Alexander Steen Stewart

Falkirk, Central Scotland
Close
Error Success