Monday, January 8, 2007

The Dsl Bunnies Comments

Rating: 5.0

There was a family of orphaned bunnies that lived in North Carolina,
And rains from Tropical Storm Ernesto flooded their burrow.
They had just gotten a new computer, and a DSL line. A
Torrent of rain caused - is this possible? - bunny brows to furrow.
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Will Barber
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Kafil Uddin Raihan 29 July 2009

Interesting story described in the poem, The poor bunny....But It is the reality, I think.....

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Not a member No 4 06 February 2007

You're a magician Will. I've been sitting here with brow to the fore furrowing furiously rabbit fashion - well, testing the theory of bunnies in burrows brow furrowing! More mesmerising wit from that brilliant pen of yours! ! jim

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Robert Howard 04 February 2007

You might use the fried bunny ears on your TV. In any case the reception of your delightful poem is clear and sharp. I think DSL must stand for 'definitely superior language.'

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Anna Russell 20 January 2007

I love, love, loved this Will - that offer of a date still stand? ;) Hugs Anna xxx

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Duncan Wyllie 13 January 2007

Loads of fun expression and imagination here Will Love duncan X

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Esther Leclerc 08 January 2007

And this still makes me laugh, too! What a fine Goofballasaurus you are, and thanks for allowing me the role of Savior of Land and Electronica, tho' not - alas - the bunnies themselves (awwwwwwwwww) ... But I betcha they were good eatin'! ! ! ; ] Esther

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Sandra Fowler 08 January 2007

What an amazing story! You have a wonderfully inventive mind. Very original, Will. Warm regards, Sandra

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Sean North 08 January 2007

diD DeM BuNNiEs WaReNn T anoTHER ChanCE Mr WiLL, ThEY SuRe LooK KinDa CuTE EnOuGH To mEEEEEEE :)

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 08 January 2007

An entertainingly clever & inventive piece of lit., Good Will! fjr

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