The Drowning Pool Comments
Somewhere there is a smile that will blow
Your black cloud down
Someday they'll be a hand to guide you
From the rotten ground
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A wonderful and perceptive poem. So very true. A great message to humanity. Very inspiring write.
Your conceptualization is very good connecting your thoughts to unseen helps which always. Comes. Very beautifully executed. Please check in S1L3 do you intend to use they'll ore there'll. And in S3L2 do you want to use your ore yiu are....just a gentle message. Hope you don't mind.
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7/28/2025 10:38:11 PM # 1.0.0
Excellent poem for humanity. Well worded and clearlt conveyed. Thank you for sharing