The Drowning Of Love Comments
Were it not for the cold hard telling of
unimaginable truths
I would have stayed in the steady stream
of you holding onto me
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Broken promises! Love and pain. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
You penned the flooding of the mind, body and soul to a love unreciprocated well. I like your writing very much. I'm new here. It's nice to meet you.
Oh amazing comparison, with water..the love.. I enjoyed reading it very much...it sounds so perfect..and the anguish is too deep. Wishes n hugs. Keep writing.
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8/13/2025 4:31:06 AM # 1.0.0
Haunting. Very nice pace, I could feel the drifting, the fear. Bravo!