The Driving Horse Comments

A metaphor poem for the mistreatment of a worker not a shirker. That's up to the reader to decide, for there are always in life givers and takers. 10+ Rose Marie for your superb poem that stops and makes one think about the outside world in general. Many thanks and remain enriched.

Beauty at stake. Toil over rules. Poem much symbolic 10+

continued: The horse belongs to the noble breed, and then this treatment. Horrible! Man has raised the horse to its rank and then this abuse. An excellent poem about the mistreatment of a loyal worker This poem goes to MyPôemList.. A 10 Full Score and much much more. Thank you so much for sharing.

I cite you here, Mrs. Juan-Austin: A beautiful horse Pulled an oversized carriage Pound the rough long road In extreme hot condition Stopped and buckled on the road. In the Netherlands it will have to deal with the group against animal abuse. We have a Party for the Animals, which ensures that an animal is treated properly

I have seen this scene many times here at Karachi but it was a donkey not a horse.

Stopped! ! Muse of the road, Toad, load! Budden, Muse of the horse. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. 🐎

Well delineated. Thank u, dear poetess.anjandev roy.

A wonderful poem... great expression! Beautifully composed....10

This profound poem is excellently penned, dear ate Rose.....10+++

I relate this with corporate situations. In any company there are work horses that work and work, and there are smart Alecs who know how to shirk, Yet, the latter go on and prosper, the former collapse on the way, get some sympathies but that's all.

Horse is changed into donkey to carry overweight cargo! !