Thursday, February 28, 2019

The Dripping Tap Comments

Rating: 4.8

I chose to spill my soul onto the page
Like a dripping tap the words fell one by one
My mind burst, needed a bigger outlet
So out poured the sentences
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Jennifer Birchall
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Matthew Holloway 06 March 2019

an enjoyable read well penned

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Amir Marandi 02 March 2019

Delicate and beautiful. Aren't we all hoping to reach to our destination, as a river to the sea? Thanks for sharing.

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Lyn Paul 28 February 2019

A delicate description of your emotions. When you have held the tears in for so long, once the tap turns on it is hard to stop it.

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Prabir Gayen 28 February 2019

Very beautiful poem dear poetess......... thanks

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Jennifer Birchall

Jennifer Birchall

Cheshire, England
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