Monday, May 9, 2011

The Drink Comments

Rating: 5.0

i'm sitting here, without a beer
lonely here to day
so i'll pour a coke you pour a shot
then i'll find my way
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Brandi Stone
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 09 May 2011

I like it. You have described it very well. Vivid imagery and remarkable style. Great write. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box by typing the name of the poem if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.

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